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Post by Lamort on Jun 24, 2006 17:30:40 GMT -5
I have begun writing the second part of my old fan fic again as some of you may or may not know or remember. There are quiet a few changes this time around, hope you enjoy them. Look to the Sign up Section for information on my characters.
Prologue
One month after Babylon’s death, the scene starts with Dyne sitting in a chair, talking with someone through a crystal ball…
“So how are you managing?” asked Dyne
“The Dark Dragon has begun moving his army into my Netherworld but I’ve held them back without much trouble.” Said a male voice from the crystal
“What about the others?”
“They’ve been managing, I haven’t heard anything from Drake though, I’m assuming that he’s dead…”
“And he will be deeply missed” said Dyne sarcastically
“How about you, holding up Ok?” asked the man
“Fine, fine the Dark Dragon doesn’t seem interested in my Netherworld anymore since Babylon died, he most likely doesn’t think me a threat…”
“Yeah but isn’t that Cosmic Dragon-girl Rose always coming there to train?”
“Hmmm, good point…Thanks for your help…” said Dyne
“Don’t mention it, just remember kid I’m only doing this because Babylon wanted me to…”
“Alright, you don’t have to bring him into this, Sienna might hear you.”
“Alright, take care of yourself kid…” the man vanished from the crystal
Dyne looked really tired, he had not had much rest since the Dark Dragon acquired his new power. ‘I wonder how Jake and the others are doing on their front…’ Dyne thought. Dyne had not heard from Jake since Rose came to train a week ago and was beginning to worry ‘Maybe I should check in, just in case…’
End Prologue
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Post by Lamort on Jun 24, 2006 17:37:20 GMT -5
Chapter 1: Changing for the Better
Dyne got up and walked across his office and opened the door, to his surprise someone was just outside “Seryu, did you want something?” Dyne asked kindly
“Uh, well…” Seryu stuttered for a moment but eventually found the words he was looking for “I uh have the report the netherworld borders…” ha said dropping a few papers “Oh no…”
“Hehe, you need to relax Seryu, you won’t last long if you loose to paperwork all the time…” said Dyne bending over to pick up the papers “I have to go somewhere, so when you find the paper just put it on my desk. Also be sure to call me if anything happens Ok?”
“Yes sir!” said Seryu nodding
“Ok, now take care and try to relax…” and Dyne left Seryu to pick up the last of the papers. Dyne proceeded out the front gate, just then Sienna came up to him.
“Where are you off to today Dyne?” Sienna asked
“Just going to check in with Jake, ”Dyne replied, “He and Rose haven’t been here in a while so I figured just in case—“
“Then I’ll go with you!” Sienna said eagerly
Dyne smiled “Alright, but lets go quickly, we can’t be away from here to long.”
“Right lets go!” Sienna then used the warp spell she had mastered with Rose over the past month to open the gate between the Netherworld and Human world.
Meanwhile at the Dark Dragon’s lair…
“So have the preparations been completed?” asked the Dark Dragon to his general
“Yes, now that all the other Overlord’s are busy defending their own Netherworlds we can focus on the Human world and Dyne’s Netherworld…” said the general
“Very good Shadow, now we can deal with that meddlesome American Dragon and Cosmic Dragon, once they are gone we’ll take out that fool Babylon’s successor. You are dismissed Shadow”
“Very well my lord…” and Shadow vanished
Back at the Human world…
Dyne and Sienna had returned to the human world and stepped into Lao Shi’s shop, as they entered they heard Lao Shi’s voice say “Who ever it is, we are closed!” and Lao Shi walked out from the back room and was surprised to see Dyne and Sienna
“Gee, I guess this means we can’t buy that T.V. after all Sienna.” Dyne said looking at Sienna who was chuckling to herself.
“Aye-Ya! Dyne, Sienna when did you get here?” Lao Shi asked
“Just a moment ago, why?” Dyne asked
“Jake and Rose had just left to do some training in the woods, but they haven’t come back yet!” Lao Shi yelled
“How long ago did they leave?” Sienna asked
“A few hours ago, but were supposed to be back after 45 minutes, and I cannot leave the shop because if Jake’s father calls and no one is here then he will get suspicious.” Said Lao Shi
“Calm down, we’ll go find them.” Dyne said
“Yeah, they probably just lost track of time out there ‘training’.” said Sienna giggling
“Alright, but hurry back!” Lao Shi yelled as Dyne and Sienna walked out the door.
After looking around the woods for a while Dyne and Sienna eventually found Rose and Jake by a small lake and to their surprise actually training. Rose was meditating by the lake and Jake was practicing with a pair of twin swords that Dyne had given him. “Well this is a surprise.” Said Dyne
“I have an idea…” said Sienna and whispered to Dyne who said
“I love the way you think Sienna.”
“Tell me something I don’t know.” And they split up and circled around Jake and Rose.
Jake and Rose continued their training without noticing Dyne and Sienna’s presence until Dyne made a deliberate noise to grab their attention “Who’s there!” Jake yelled Rose turned to see what was happening when Sienna silently landed behind her and teleported the both of them away “Huh? Rose!” Jake yelled turning around to see Rose gone, Dyne then took his own window of chance and moved in behind Jake, but to Dyne’s surprise Jake was actually ready for him as Jake swung around with one of his swords, Dyne of course guarded with his own.
“Well this is a surprise…you actually noticed us…” said Dyne
“Yeah well we have been training haven’t we?” said Jake smirking
“Well lets see just how much you’ve improved!” and Dyne began to test Jake’s skills
At the same time Sienna was beginning her own test of how much Rose had improved with her newly found powers “So have you been doing what Salome told you?” asked Sienna
“Yep, thanks to her my magic power has increased a lot!” Rose said confidently
“Well lets just see!” and they began…
15 minutes later the four of them were walking out of the woods, Jake and Rose had a few bruises on them while Dyne and Sienna looked untouched “I’m impressed with how much you two have improved.” Said Dyne
“Yeah but we couldn’t even lay a finger on you? How can you call that improvement?” said Jake
“Beating us shouldn’t be your goal, the Dark Dragon is.” Said Dyne
“Yeah but he is as strong as an Overlord now! How can we beat him with that kind of power!?” Rose asked
“Well he may have the power of the Seven Sins now, but doesn’t have the discipline a true Overlord has to use it’s true potential.” Said Sienna
“Yeah, I trained under Babylon for 50 years, so don’t think that I became this strong overnight.” Said Dyne, Jake then looked very discouraged by this “Look you two have great potential, training is all you need—“
“But we have been training and we still can’t even land a hit on you two!” Jake yelled. They were all now about a block from Lao Shi’s shop at this point
“You are not training to beat me or Sienna, you are training to beat the Dark Dragon. Power means nothing if you don’t have the training to use it, not only are you two in that situation but so is the Dark Dragon! That is why he kept his head down until now!” Dyne said
“You mean he’s already back!?” Jake asked, Dyne said nothing until they entered Lao Shi’s shop
“Look the Dark Dragon’s army has begun to move, but only on other Netherworlds, I don’t think he will worry about us for now.”
“So he has begun his attacks…” said Lao Shi coming out of the back room
“Yeah, but like I said he hasn’t attacked my Netherworld or here…” just as Dyne finished his sentence a burst of red flame in front of them made everyone except Dyne and Sienna jump, when the flame faded are note appeared and Dyne caught it and began to read “It seems I have spoken to soon, the Dark Dragon has begun attacking my Netherworld, Sienna its time we left!”
End Chapter 1
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Post by Lamort on Jun 24, 2006 17:43:45 GMT -5
Chapter 2: General Shadow
“Wait, we’ll go with you!” said Jake
“That is not my decision Jake.” Dyne said looking to Lao Shi for an answer
“Jake and Rose may go…” said Lao Shi nodding
“Alright! Time for some real action!” Jake said jumping
“Don’t mess around Jake, this is no longer just a simple battle” said Dyne looking serious, Jake then calmed down “This is war, things are a lot different now…”
“Right, so are we going or not?” asked Rose
“Ok, Sienna when you’re ready…” said Dyne
Mean while in Dyne’s Netherworld…
“We can’t hold them back for long dood!” cried a Prinny
“The units at the gate are being pushed back, the enemy is going to enter the castle!” yelled a soldier
“Tighten to guard of the gate!” Seryu commanded “We have to hold the gate until Lord Dyne returns from the human world!”
“Yes sir.”
“Aye-Aye dood!” and the Prinny and soldier left to return to the fight
‘Lord Dyne…I hope you return soon…’ thought Seryu
Dyne and the others returned to the Netherworld…
“There’s the castle!” said Jake pointing
There were a large number of shades attacking the castle.
“Alright, we need to get to the castle gate and help the rest of the army.” Said Dyne
“Ok, Dragon UP!” Jake yelled
“I won’t hold BACK!” Sienna yelled
“See you in HELL!” yelled Dyne
“Feel my POWER!” Rose yelled
They all transformed into their dragon forms, this had been the first time that Dyne had seen Rose’s dragon form. Rose was white with partially transparent seven color wings and had a blonde mane like her own hair.
“We have to move fast, don’t stop till we reach the gate!” said Dyne and the all took off for the castle.
Meanwhile at the castle…
“Doods, we can’t fight anymore!” cried a Prinny
“We have to abandon the castle dood!” yelled a second Prinny
“No! We have to stay here and protect the castle until Lord Dyne returns!” yelled Seryu
“If you want to stay here and die then be my guest, we are leaving!” said a soldier
Seryu drew his katana and placed on the soldier’s throat “Lord Dyne does not forgive traitors, and neither do I, now return to your post!” the soldier obeyed “Ok, now its time that I joined in…” Seryu jumped down and charged at a group of shades. In a burst of speed Seryu was on the other side of them “You fail…” Seryu said sheathing his katana and the shadow dragons vanished in a burst of smoke.
“Dood look! Its Lord Dyne and Lady Sienna!!” yelled a Prinny
Seryu turned and there was Dyne, Sienna, Jake and Rose coming up fast on the castle ‘I knew you would return my lord…’ thought Seryu.
Dyne, Sienna, Jake and Rose flew through the gate and landed in front of Seryu
“What happened? How did such a large force invade so quickly?” Dyne asked
“I don’t know sir, they suddenly attacked, its as if they appeared out of no where.” Said Seryu
“But, the Dark Dragon isn’t here, do you know who is controlling the shades?” Sienna asked
“What! The Dark Dragon isn’t even here!” said Jake who was surprised
“Yes, I could sense that the Dark Dragon was not here from the first moment we arrived.” Said Sienna
“Well then who is controlling the shades?” asked Rose
“My guess would be someone who is in liege with the Dark Dragon is, but I haven’t seen anything but shades.” Said Seryu
“Right well, first things first. We have to get rid of the shades, then we can focus on how they got here.” Said Dyne and the others nodded “Seryu round up the rest of the troops and give them their orders.” Seryu bowed his head and ran off “Ok, time for us to go wild!”
“Awwww-Yeah! The Am-Drags in the house now!” Jake said and went off to fight with Rose following him smiling slightly. Sienna chuckled and Dyne just smirked at Jake’s eagerness.
“I hope he doesn’t expect this to be over quickly…” said Dyne and he and Sienna joined in the fighting. When Dyne had broken through the first wave there was a burst of darkness in front of him causing him to jump back. There was someone standing where the burst had been “And just who are you?” Dyne asked
“Hehehe, very straight forward aren’t you? If you must know I am Shadow, the Dark Dragon’s general, commander of the shade army.” Shadow had an insane smile on his face
“So you are the one who is commanding them, then what I have to do is clear…” Dyne rushed at Shadow, but he vanished before making contact. Shadow reappeared behind Dyne and was ready to strike, but Dyne predicted his movement and whipped his tail at Shadow throwing him back. “You can’t defeat me with such cheap tricks.” Growled Dyne, but Shadow just laughed
“Of course not, all I am doing is testing you. I’ve seen what I came for…” Shadow vanished along with all the shades leaving Dyne standing there.
‘Just who was that?’ Dyne thought ‘Just testing us? What could he be planning?’
End Chapter 2
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Post by Lamort on Jun 24, 2006 17:48:42 GMT -5
Chapter 3: Finding the Truth
Dyne rounded up Jake and the others, as well as the remaining soldiers and they were all meeting in a large hall.
Dyne then spoke “After talking with Seryu we have found something most unsettling…” Dyne then sat down to let Seryu speak, Seryu was nervous for a moment but spoke with confidence.
“When the enemy was suddenly upon the castle our original assumption was that the watch had not be keeping their posts effectively,” several people in the room shifted around, a few muttered words of anger “However further searching has shown evidence that someone had used magic to get the army close to the castle without us noticing.”
“How could someone teleport an entire army!” someone yelled, several others shouted in agreement
“Silence!” yelled Dyne, when the room was silent Dyne motioned Seryu to continue.
“However the magic used was not space oriented like a warp spell, it was completely different…” Seryu took a deep breath and said “It was time, someone was able to stop time long enough to allow the entire army to converge on the castle.” The room exploded in cries of shock and disbelief.
“That’s not possible!”
“No one has that kind of power anymore!”
“Who could possibly do something like this?”
“It must be the Dark Dragon!”
“Yeah, now that the Dark Dragon has the power of the Seven Sins he can stop time!”
“All of you shut up!!” roared Dyne, the room then fell silent “The Dark Dragon still cannot control his new power, or he would have been here in person. I also don’t think that the Dark Dragon would be able to stop time anyway, the kind of power needed to stop time is be yound that of even an Overlord. Someone else is doing this, and we will find out who.”
Meanwhile at the Dark Dragon’s lair…
Shadow was kneeling before the Dark Dragon and a hooded figure sanding beside him. “Why did you attack Dyne’s Netherworld?” asked the Dark Dragon in a dangerous voice
Shadow bowed his head lower “Forgive me my lord, but I had to test Babylon’s successor to see if he was a threat…”
“Such actions are likely to have us found out!” yelled the hooded figure in a female voice
“Enough Chang,” said the Dark Dragon to the hooded figure
“But my lord—“ Chang started
“Shadow is correct in his actions, Babylon may be dead but he was no fool, he would not leave that child in charge of his netherworld if he did not have confidence in him.” Chang could not believe what she was hearing and walked out of the room
“That Shadow,” said Chang taking off her hood “What is he playing at?”
Back at the Netherworld…
The meeting had ended after a few arguments, Dyne, Sienna, Jake, Rose, and Seryu were the only ones left in the room. “Well that could have gone better.” Said Dyne standing up
“So Dyne, do you know who stopped time?” asked Jake
Dyne looked at Jake for a moment “No, but I did see someone very strange…” said Dyne thinking back
“Who was it?” asked Sienna
“He said his name was Shadow, that he was the Dark Dragon’s general…” said Dyne
“His general!” said Sienna slightly shocked
“That’s not all, he said that this attack was only a test of our skills.” Said Dyne gravely
“Testing? I had wondered why they just vanished after they were clearly about to win the fight…” said Rose
“Well one things for sure, this fight has only just begun…” said Dyne
End Chapter Three
At this point my story is going to change greatly the next chapter, New Allies, will be posted later after I PM a few people, until then have fun and tell me how you like my story thus far. ;D
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Post by Hero on Jun 25, 2006 17:38:40 GMT -5
Awesome, post more when you can. I want to see the new stuff! ;D
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Post by Lamort on Jun 26, 2006 17:45:03 GMT -5
Alright Hero, since you are the only one to have read so far here is the next chapter, and where things have changed a lot ;D
Chapter Four: New Allies
Two days after Shadow’s attack, Dyne is talking with Seryu in his office…
“So Sienna went with Jake to bring some friends?” asked Seryu
“Yeah, she should be back soon…” said Dyne
“But…are you sure it was smart to let Sienna go with Jake? I mean you know how she can get…”
Dyne was thinking for a moment and muttered to himself “Oh, s***…” he then cupped his face in his hands “This…isn’t going to end well…”
With Sienna…
“So who all are you planning on asking for help?” Sienna asked Jake as they walked down the sidewalk in New York
“Well there’s Dave and a couple of friends of mine who might be willing to help.” Said Jake
“Oh, its been a while since I’ve seen Dave,” Sienna said smiling “Do you think he would remember me?”
“Who could ever forget you Sienna?” Jake said laughing slightly
With Dyne…
“Well what’s the worst that could happen?” asked Seryu trying to cheer Dyne up
Dyne looked up and said “Sienna could be herself…”
With Sienna…
Jake led Sienna to his house. “So this is where you live…” said Sienna looking around
“Oh Yeah, that’s right you haven’t been to my house before have you?’ said Jake opening the door, Sienna looked around “Hey Dave? You home?” Jake called up the stairs
“That you Jake?” called Dave
“Yeah, and Sienna’s here to!” Jake called back
“Hiiiii! Dave!” Sienna yelled upstairs
Dave walked into view at the top of the stairs “Oh, hi Sienna, where’s Dyne?”
“Oh he’s still back in the Netherworld, I came here because we kind of need some help in fighting the Dark Dragon.” She said smiling
“The Dark Dragon?” said Dave now interested in what Sienna had to say
“Yep, seems he’s finally starting to move again and we don’t have enough help to get rid of him.”
“Ok then I’ll help you.” Said Dave walking downstairs
“Glad to here it…” Said Sienna smiling, Dave took a step back but Sienna placed her hand on his shoulder “See you!” she said with a grin and Dave vanished
“What did you just do!?” Jake yelled
“Oh, just sent him to the Netherworld.” Said Sienna smiling
With Dyne…
Dave fell onto the floor of Dyne’s office and looked around and saw Dyne “Dyne? What just happened?”
“See Seryu, I told you things like this were gonna happen!” Dyne yelled looking past Dave
Dave turned around and saw Seryu standing there “Well I’m not the one who let Sienna go there alone!” Seryu yelled back
“Ok…I’ll ask again: What just happened?” asked Dave
“Sienna is being herself…” said Dyne going into his desk and pulling out a deck of cards “Care for a game of poker?”
“Sure!” said Seryu
“Ok, but I never played before…” said Dave
With Sienna…
“So, Dave’s at the Netherworld now?” asked Jake
“Yup, I sent him right to Dyne’s new office.” Said Sienna with a smile
“Ok…well uh Rose I supposed to be bringing someone from the Isle of Draco, and we’re all supposed to meet here.”
“Ok…I guess I could wait here with you…” She said with a wink, Jake just took a few steps back
With Dyne…
Dyne, Seryu, and Dave were sitting at a table playing poker with Seryu was dealing. “Ok, the game is no limit hold-em, aces high.” said Seryu.
“No limit hold-em?” Dave asked
“We each get two cards on the deal, and there are no limits in how much we can bet at any time.” Said Dyne looking at his cards
“Oh…Ok” said Dave nervously, looking at his own cards.
With Sienna…
After waiting for about 10 minutes Rose arrived with none other that Hero! “So you must be Sienna, Rose told me about you. My name is Hero, its nice to meet you.”
Sienna giggled “Nice to meet you Hero, since you’re here I guess you’re taking us up on our request?” asked Sienna
“Well if it’s to get rid of the Dark Dragon, then yeah I’ll help ya.” Hero said nodding
“Ok, then I guess I’ll see you later!” said Sienna and she walked forward
“Sienna don’t!” said Jake
“Wha—“ Hero started but Sienna had placed her hand on Hero’s shoulder and he vanished.
With Dyne…
Like Dave, Hero fell onto the floor of Dyne’s office rather confused as to what happened “Yo!” Dyne called out and Hero looked over to see the three of them at the table.
“Who are you, where am I, and what just happened?” Hero asked getting up
“In order; I’m Dyne, that’s Seryu, and Jake’s brother Dave. You are in my office in my Netherworld. And what just happened was Sienna being herself.” Said Dyne
“Ok, but what are you all doing? I was under the impression that you needed my help with fighting the Dark Dragon.”
“We do, but we’re just passing the time while waiting for Sienna to get back.” Said Seryu
“Want to join us?” asked Dave
“Ah, sure…” said Hero walking over
With Sienna…
“Are you gonna do that to everyone?” asked Jake
“Probably.” Said Sienna with a smile, Jake just shook his head “So who’s next?” asked Sienna
“Well there are two others I’ve asked, they have said yes and we’re gonna meet them in Central Park.” Said Rose
“Well, lets get going!” said Sienna walking out the door
“Aw man, this is gonna be a long day…” said Jake going after Sienna, Rose right behind him.
With Dyne…
“What are we gonna do if Sienna keeps sending people like this?” asked Seryu while he dealt everyone their hand
“Well, it won’t be a problem until Sienna gets here…” said Dyne
“Why only when she gets here?” asked Hero
“Because, when she does get here there is gonna be quite a few people with anger towards her…though if they’re smart you’ll leave her alone and forget it ever happened.” Said Dyne
“Why is that? She’s only one girl.” Said Dave
“Well as they say ‘Hell hath no fury like that of a woman’s’” said Dyne
With Sienna…
Jake and Rose lead Sienna to central park where they met Lavitz and Sparkx “Hey guys!” Jake called walking up to them “I’d like you to meet—“
“Me! Sienna.” Sienna said interrupting him, walking up to Lavitz and Sparkx “So who are you two?”
“Uh, nice to meet you I’m Sparkx.”
“And I’m Lavitz.”
“Nice to meet you two.” Sienna said smiling sweetly “So are you two ready to go?”
Sparkx looked at Lavitz who nodded “I guess so…”
“Good,” said Sienna walking forward and placing her hands on their shoulders “See you at the castle.” And the two of them vanished, Sienna then turned to Jake and Rose “Its time for you two to go as well.” She said smiling
With Dyne…
Dyne and Hero were helping Sparkx and Lavitz up when Rose and Jake dropped in, and landed on Dyne. “Jake…get…off” Dyne groaned
“That Sienna,” Jake said pushing Rose up “She really needs to learn some self control.”
“Tell me about it.” Said Rose brushing herself off
“Jake get off!” Dyne said
“Oh! Sorry man.” Said Jake getting up
“Hey, whatever.” Dyne said brushing himself off, and then realized “Wait a minute, where is Sienna!” Everyone glanced around the office but didn’t see her “Oh, s***” Dyne said looking at the floor.
To Be Continued…
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Sienna: While wandering the dark depths of New York City the lovely beuty Sienna was saved by a valiant wolf.
Garth: Who are you again?
Sienna: But alas the wolf must know that the sexy beuty Sienna already has one that she loves
Garth: Say what?
Sienna: But fear not, I the ultimate beuty Sienna shall find someone for you to love.
Garth: Are you on some kind of medication?
Sienna: Next time on Perfect Match Maker Sienna, Chapter 4 Part 2, A match made for a wolf! Oh love, is so romantic!
Garth: You're one scary girl...
See you all later! ;D
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Post by Hero on Jun 26, 2006 18:23:54 GMT -5
YES!!! I love this story!!! Please add more ASAP!!! ;D
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Post by Lamort on Jun 27, 2006 16:55:39 GMT -5
Right. the next chapter is here, enjoy...
Chapter 3 – Part 2: Mia, Ryun, and Garth
Sienna walked around central park for a few minutes before heading out into the city ‘This place is so fabulous! I would love it so much if I could stay here forever’
With Dyne…
“So what do we do?” Jake asked
“Well, we can’t go looking for Sienna now, she could be anywhere in the city at this point.” Said Dyne
“So you’re just gonna leave her out there? The city is a lot scarier than you think for some girl to be out there alone.” Said Lavitz
Dyne turned to look at him “Sienna is a lot tougher than she appears, anyone who would mess with here would most likely have a very rude awakening coming their way. And besides, if she gets in over her head then she can always just teleport back here.”
“Well anyway Dyne,” Seryu said, “My own friends should be here soon to help us too.”
“Your friends?” Hero asked “No offense but I think you and your friends may be just a bit to young to be helping us fight.”
Seryu laughed “Don’t underestimate our abilities now, we are a lot stronger than we look.”
“Well then don’t overestimate yours kid.” Said Lavitz
“Hey, knock it off, Seryu may not look it but he is a lot older then all of you.” Said Dyne
With Sienna…
Sienna had found her way into an alley on the less then good portion of New York ‘I take it back, this place sucks!’ Sienna thought as she turned around to walk back, but there were people behind here
“Where do you think you’re going pretty lady?” asked a short man in a hat and overcoat
“Hmph, if you don’t want to get burned then I suggest you get out of my way.” Said Sienna
“Hmmm, this lady’s got some fire to her boss.” Said one of the taller figures
“Yeah, lets take her back with us boys and see what she can do.” The short one lifted his hat, Sienna let out a cry of disgust, it was Herbert the goblin “Get her boys.” Herbert yelled and the four other goblins ran at Sienna. Just then someone jumped down from on top of one of the buildings surrounding the alley.
“If there is one thing I can’t stand more then the Hunts clan, it’s a bunch of goblins that would pick on a defenseless girl!” said the figure, it was taller then Sienna, and had on a tattered old coat.
With Dyne…
“What do you mean older? Clearly he isn’t older than any of us.” Said Sparkx
“Well, here in the netherworld people don’t age as quickly as they do in your world, Seryu here is 1125 years old, and I am 1431 years old.” Dyne said smiling slightly.
Everyone except Jake, Rose, and Dave looked at Dyne with complete looks of surprise on their faces.
With Sienna…
The goblins were now nervous at the new arrival in the alley and were slowly backing up ‘Who is this guy? He must be strong if those creeps are scared of him.’ Thought Sienna
Herbert growled “Stay out of this kid, you’ll live longer.”
“No, I don’t think I’m going anywhere, but as for you guys, you’re not gonna lay any of your dirty hands on this girl.” The person growled back, at this point Sienna looked down and noticed that whoever was helping her wasn’t wearing any shoes!
‘This guy…is something strange…’ Sienna walked forward looked at the person’s face, the first thing she noticed was his yellow eyes ‘He’s not human’ Sienna thought looking at him “So who are you, wolf boy?”
“Wolf Boy? My name is Garth.” He said
“Well then Garth, why are you protecting little ol’ me?” Sienna asked smiling, Garth just looked at her with an agitated stare “Tee-Hee, well if your gonna be that way then I’ll just send them away myself.”
With Dyne…
“You’re joking right?” asked Hero
“Nope.” Said Dyne
“Then would you care to prove it?” asked Lavitz
“By doing what?” asked Seryu, no one answered but then came a knock on the door, Seryu walked over, opened it, and two kids no older than Seryu walked in, only they weren’t normal looking. One was a boy with orange hair, orange fox ears, a large foxtail, furry fox feet, and had claws. The other, a girl, also had orange hair that was tied back with a ribbon, she had fox ears too and a foxtail, but didn’t have the feet or claws of the boy. “Glad you’re here,” said Seryu and he turned to the others “Well everyone, this is Mia and her twin brother Ryun.”
“A pleasure to meet you all.” Mia said politely
“Yeah, yeah, when do we get to fight?” asked Ryun
“That’s it,” Dyne said and the others turned to look at him “A fight, a match between me and whichever one wants to challenge me.”
With Sienna…
Sienna held the palm of her hand toward the goblins and a white flame formed, the goblins began to run away at this “Tee-Hee, take this!” and Sienna shot the flame at them and it hit Herbert right in the seat of his pants and ran even faster away yelling in pain. Sienna turned to Garth who wasn’t exactly sure as to what had happened.
“Who…what are you girl?” asked Garth
“Tee-Hee, I’m Sienna and I’m a dragon, a celestial dragon.” She said smiling “You look like a strong wolf, think you could help me with something?”
“Like what? What could you possibly need my help for?”
“Well, the Dark Dragon has recently began his invasion on my loved one’s world, so I came here to get the help of some friends, feel like lending us your strength?” Sienna asked
With Dyne…
“Alright I’ll fight you,” said Hero “But I got to warn you my sword, the Soul Reaper is gonna tear you apart if you’re not as good as you say you are.” Said Hero unsheathing his sword
Dyne Chuckled “Well, my swords, King Crimson,” Dyne said as his swords slid out of his sleeves “Are the ultimate swords of darkness here.”
“Then this fight is going to be great.” Said Hero smiling
To Be Continued…
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Sienna: Its fight time as my beloved Dyne must fight the evil and dark Hero!
Hero: Hey, I'm not evil!
Dyne: He's not evil Sienna...
Sienna: But oh the light of justice shines through the King Crimson sending Hero back to the dark depths wence he came!
Hero: Is she always like this?
Dyne: Unfortunatly...
Sienna: Next time on Ultimate Showdowns, Chapter 4 Part 3, Fall of Hero! A fight you won't want to miss!
Hero: Who does she think she's kidding?
Dyne: Just ignor her and maybe she'll stop...
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Post by Hero on Jun 27, 2006 17:02:35 GMT -5
LOL!!! The chap previews are funny! Keep continuing, looks great! ;D
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Post by Lamort on Jun 27, 2006 19:22:35 GMT -5
Working on it, but I just noticed a really embarrassing typo in both chapters...if you do not know what they were I am not going to tell you...
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Post by dinoman214 on Sept 1, 2006 18:47:13 GMT -5
Cool story, lots of action, and that's what I love about fanfics, I would really like for one of my characters to be in it, say aku? Anyway good story!
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