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Post by americanhuntsgirl on Nov 26, 2005 18:56:23 GMT -5
Chapter 1
Thorn ran as fast as she could. She cloud still her Jakes voice shouting "Rose!WAIT",But thorn kpt on wirting.She wanted to get away from all that madness that just happened between her and Jake.
She took a short cut to the Huntsliar and was there in 3 min flat.
When she got to the huntslair she ran up into her room, slamed the door, threw something that the wall and started to cry. Rose couldnt belive what justed happened. It was the Jake the hole time!Rose had to do something. Change schools, anything!Then it hit her. Change schools Thats it!
Rose ran downstairs and asked the Huntsman if she could change schools. He said yes without any questions.
Jake's P.O.V.
"Rose!Wait!"shouted Jake.
Darn it!thought Jake SHe's Gone and there's nothing i can do about it
Jake Tired to run but then her rememberd that the ropes to his feet where still tied up!And with that he fell to the ground.
Jake was not pleased.
"Mouth of the Dragon" he muttered.
Then everything went black.
The Next thing he knew Fu dog and Gramps where around him, and that he had blown off the ropes with Fire.
Jake didnt tell Fu and Gramps that he had told the Huntsgirl his ture indnty, for fear that The Dragon Master would freak.Then without saying anything Jake.Fu and Gramps headed home.
As soon as he got home he headed for his room. He ran into his room, slamed the door and threw a pillow at the wall.
~The Next Day~
Jake got up and left the house within 15 min flat.When he got to school Trixie and Spud where teasing him about a note in his locker.
"Jake's got a love note, Jake's got a love note!" they sang toghter.
"Guys please, will you to just SHUT UP?"asked Jake as they walked to their lockers(which where right next to each other)
Then he saw the note.
Jake ran to his locker, pulled the note out, and Read it.
It said
Jake,
Im so Sorry,
Rose.
Jake sighed, put the note back into his locker and slamed the locker door.The note ment somethign along the lines wicth ment.
"Sorry Jakey i anit coming Back for ya"
Jake just headed for class. ------------------------------------------------
Well theres the First Chappie..Will post second one soon[
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Post by Dave Jackson on Nov 26, 2005 19:10:02 GMT -5
It is nice to read this fanfic again. I love it!
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Post by americanhuntsgirl on Nov 26, 2005 19:31:42 GMT -5
Thank you! Heres Chapter 2 ------------------------------------------------ Chapter 2: New friends, New emenys.
Rose got up the next moring, got dressed and looked out the window.There was Snow!On the gournd!Then tears came to her eyes.She had forgotten that this day was the day.And she was only 5 years old. Know she was almost 14(DOB: Decmember 18). Rose just merryly sighed. think about the horrblie day 9 years ago.
Rose was your bacsic 5 year old. Blonde hair, Blue eyes, and with a starnge Dragon birthmark on her hand, She had no idea what it ment. Intill that day.
Rose was talking to her little stuff aniaml kitten Coco.And no matter where she went she always had it.No matter what. and when she didnt have it.Well im not gonna say what would happen.
That moring Roxy looked out the window and saw something she never thoguth she would see.
The HuntsMlobie was there.
Roxy took Rose by the hands and lead her down into the basement they never use.
"Mommy whatz going on"asked Rose, clutching to Tigger with Fright
"Just stay here Rose ok?" asid Roxy.
Rose nodded her head.
Her mom went up stairs and heared a voice she never thought she would hear again.
"WHERE ARE YOU ROXY AND ROSE?"said the voice
Rose stodd there with fright.
"You cant have her, no matter what, you cant have her! She will be nomral!" said Rose's Mom.
"Nomral or Not it's her Desinty!' shouted the Voice
" I DONT CARE"
"You dont have a dragon to help you this time"
Rose heared a loud noise, then the sound that a body had fallen.The 25 year old women with blond hair and green eyes, 25 year old women.
Rose started to cry
Tears Came to Rose's eyes,but then she wiped them away. Her Alram went off, and she ran out into the cold wonderful, yet sad weather.
The wind was firce, hard and when you opened you mouth to take a breath the wind you go stragnt down your mouth and making hard to bearth.(Hey! you think thats bad you should have seem my bus stop TuesDay!)
Rose's Hair blew everywhere in the wind.And after two minutes of walking Rose finally can to her bus stop.She took a step into the Bus stop and notice that there where two other kids in there.
Rose looked up at them.
The girl had jet black hair,and she was wearing red white and blue tee shirt and pants.She was also wearing a blue and Green winter coat.
Rose looked at the other person.
He was a boy, no duh. He Had short brown hair and wore what looked like a Basket ball outfit(What an idoit Rose thought) He to was wearing a Blue and green Jacket.
"Hi, your the New Girl Right?" asked the Black haired girl
Rose nodded her head.
"Well hi, Im Hunter and this is..oh so sorry i forgot your name.What is it Girly"asked Hunter to The Black hair girl
"God Hunter, you've know me for 3 years and you dont remember that my name is Jade?" asked Jade.
Hunter and Jade held out there hands.But when the shook hands they both saw the Mark.
"Whats Thats?" asked Jade
"Oh is-Rose looked down- its a birthmark,"Lied Rose
"Oh ok" said Hunter
"So whats your name?" one of them asked
"Rose"
Just then the Bus came.They all hoped on a took a seat.
"So what do you like?"asked Hunter.
(FYI: what rose is about to say, well thats all the things i like)
"Well theres, Anime, Mamga,Drawing,Cartoons,writing, candy(hey who doesnt like Candy?)Dragons, Dragon slayers, and-" said Rose
"Wait, Hold up.You acttluy belive in that stuff?" asked Hunter.
"Yea so?"asked Rose
"Oh god hunter, your always juding people by what they like,Just because someone blives in the magic stuff doesnt mean there a werdio." said Jade
Just then the Bus screehed to a stop. Jade,Rose, and Hunter all slammed forword.
"What the heck was that?"asked Rose
"Oh darnit, its that Drangels" said Jade
"Who?"
Just then a couple of Braty looking Girls came on the bus. The leader(Amy) had short red hair and Drak(not goth)clothes.Kirssy had meduim legnth Borwn Hair and wore Gothic Clothes.Rose shuddered at the sight of those two.
"Well, well,well its dumn and dummer and look they have a new firend to help them" said Amy.
Rose looked up at Amy.
"Oh look Amy she scared!" said Kirssy
"You want to fight?"asked Rose
"Fine, After school, central Park 3:30 dont be late" said Amy
Your so dead thoght Rose
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Post by Dave Jackson on Nov 26, 2005 19:42:22 GMT -5
Still loving it! You are a good writer!
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Post by americanhuntsgirl on Nov 26, 2005 19:48:38 GMT -5
thank yo so much! -------------------------------------------------- Chapter 3: Ashes and the New Member
~At the end of the Day~
Jake was about to head home when he saw that someone else was in Rose's Locker.Shokced, Jake Diced to go talk to her.
The Girl had long blonde hair in a ponytail, with read streaks in her hair, A black leather jacket, a red tank top ,a pair of blue jeans with dragons on them.And on her right hand she had a light blue Dragon Birthmark.
"Um..Hi, i was just wondering do you know the girl that used to have her locker her?" Jake asked
Ashes stod there in shock.He knew about Rose?Her cusion that was like a twin to her?
"Um..No..sorry" she said.
"Oh ok" said jake and with that he left.
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Thoughts went in and out of Ashes head.So this kid knoew about Rose.So what?But what if it ment something?What if she was the American Dragon?
All these thoughts went in and out of Ashes head but She dieced that it ment nothing.
As Ashes started to walk back to the Huntslair, she noticed something red,and green.
Oh crap Him.She thought.
Ashes ran into the ally and pulled out her Huntsgirl uniform.
It looked just like the Huntsgirls oufit but with Flames on the pockets near the end of the Arm sleeves and near the feet.
She quickly changed into Ashes and went off to find that Darn Dragon that was after her and Rose.
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Post by Dave Jackson on Nov 26, 2005 19:52:12 GMT -5
You must be tired of me by now lol. Still good. Trust me, some of the members have gone off for the holidays and will be back tomorrow. Then others will read the fanfics.
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Post by americanhuntsgirl on Nov 26, 2005 19:55:31 GMT -5
lol im not tried of you..I just want to post this FF ------------------------------------------------------------------ Chapter 4: Fnial Goodbye to you
Darn that Dragon, He's all ways messing up our plans.Well this is his last time for that!Ashes Thought.
Ashes ran up into the Roof and was there in 3 min flat.When she got there nobody was there!Just Thorn and wait who the heck was he?
"Thorn, who the heck is this?" hissed Ashes.
"Oh sorry this is Hunteryou know the guy firm school?Turns out his family was part of the GOOD huntsclan"said Thorn
"Um..Ok?"said Ashes
"wazz up Baby Miss me?"asked that oh so fmailr voice
Ashes,Huntsboy,and Thorn tunred around to see the American Dragon Right there.
"Holy Crap! there 3 of you!" said jake
"Got a problem with that Dragon?"asked Ashes
"No it just makes it easir to fight you"said Jake
"Maybe it wount JAKE."said Thorn
"Maybe it will ROSE" said Jake
Ashes Rasied her staff to stop the fight.Thorn,Hunter and Jake all stood there looking at her.
"Wait hold up,You two know each other?"asked Ashes
"Ya its Jake Long that moron i used to go to school with!"said Thorn
"Thats Right baby and you just had to be the Huntsgirl"said Jake
"Well you just had to be that american Dragon didnt you Jake?"asked Rose
"Hey its not liked i wanted to be the Am Drag."said Jake
Thorn pulled off her masked and started at Jake.
"Well maybe you should THINK ABOUT YOU FRIENDS BEFORE YOU THINK ABOUT YOUR DUITES JAKE.I WAS HEART BROKEN!" shoued Rose
"WELL MAYBE YOU SHOULD QUIT!"shouted Jake
"MAYBE I WILL!" Thorn shouted Back
"GUYS SHUT UP"shouted Ashes
Just then the Dragon Master came in with Fu dog.
"Gramps No!" shouted Jake.
Thorn smiled.This was her chance,Chance to slay a dragon.
Thorn lept into the air.The Tool in her hands.The attcked the Dragon Master and Pinned him to the ground.
"No"wishpered Jake
Ashes and Hunter stood there.Not saying anythingn for fear that Thorn would kill them.
Thorn rasied the tool to the Dragon neck.Brought it up and was ready to swing.If she hit it in the right place he would be dead.She held up the tool and swong it.She had hit him int he right spot.
He was dead.
"G!!!NO HOW COULD YOU THORN??"shouted Jake.
Thorn stood there.The wepaon held blood on it.She had slayed her first dragon.
Thorn just stood there in shock.SHe had tought that slaying a dragon would be good.But she was worng.
SHe,Ashes and Hunter, ran off the roof top and into the street.
Theres no place to go,No place to go,try her eyes broken inside.
Jake stood there looking done.He couldnt bleive Thorn.She had killed Gramps.
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Post by Dave Jackson on Nov 26, 2005 19:56:40 GMT -5
lol..alright ;D. If you ever want a fanfic, post it here. You can guarentee I will read it lol. It is almost sad how much I love fanfictions.
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Post by americanhuntsgirl on Nov 26, 2005 20:05:31 GMT -5
lol thats funny -------------------------------------------------------- Chpater 5: Fate in the Hands of Ashes
As soon as Rose got into the Huntslair she ran into her room and started to cry.
Why?Why?Why?Why?Thoguht Rose
There was a knock on her door.
"THORN open up its me CandyCorn."said Artmis(aka Ashes)
"Why,Why,Why?"asked Rose
CandyCorn opened the Door to find Rose with her head on her bead crying.
Darn it not agianthought CandyCorn
CandyCorn looked around.And fianlly sat down on the bed.She started Hard at her cusion.
"CC this is all my flaut The Darn Dragon is Dead,Jake hates me...and..and..and i dont know what to do!"said Rose as she started to cry.
CandyCorn started at her.her lil cousin never and i mean never broke down like this just becasue of a guy!
Candy had to do someing.Something that would make her feel better.Then it came to her.
She had to get Jake back.
"Um...Rose..Im..just...gonna...gok seeyoulaterBYE!" said CandyCorn
CandyCorn walked out of Rose's room and headed down stairs.
When she got there the Huntsman ment her.
"Is..it..Ture..That Thorn slayed her first Dragon?"asked Her Master.
"Yea sure it is go ask her,BYE!"said CandyCorn
"HOLD IT!"said the Huntsman.
Darn what do you know?Thought CandyCorn
"Where are you going Ashes?"he asked
"To a friends house to plan Thorn' Birthday torrow."she repiled
CandyCorn ran out of the House and Down into the Basement and Grabbed her Skateborad and Headed for Jakes House.
When she got there she took ahold of her skateboard and knocked on the door.
"Hi."said Haley
"Hi is Jake here?"asked Ashes
"Ya,Hold on,JAKE GET DOWN HERE!"said Haley.
Jake came down stairs instaly.
"WHAT HALEY?-Jake looks out the Door-Hi have i meet you before"asked Jake
"Ya today during school" sadi Ashes
"Oh ok well come in"said jake
"Jake i need to talk to you about something-Ashes looks down at haley-alone"she said.
"Oh ok come one" he said.
Jake and Ashes ran up stair into Jakes Bedroom.As so as they got in there,Jake closed the door.
"Know tell me what this is all about?"asked Jake.
"Listen to me Jake,You have to get back toghter with Rose!You just Have to!"said Ashes
"Why?Wait who told you about Rose??"Jaked Demaned.
"I....I...I. cant tell you" Ashes Said.
Jake came over to her and took her by the Collar.
"Tell me Know!"he demaned
Ashes looked down at started to stutter.
"Im her ciuson and i work for the Huntsclan!" she said.
Jake let go of her, shocked at what she just said.
"Your what?"he asked not Belving what he had just heard.
Ashes started to Cry.
"She's my cusion and i work for the Huntsclan, thats why i have this!"sobbed Ashes as she held out her right hand.
Jake Took her right hand and looked at it.Sure enoght there was the mark of the huntscaln not a red dragon but a light blue one.
Darn it not another good looking gurl in the Huntclan!thought Jake
"Jake im sorry but after what happened with your gramps,Rose broke down into tears and..Well i knew i just had to get you two back togothere and since her Birthday is torrmow i thought you should come."said Ashes
"Ok i will come just dont tell Rose, and umm what does she like?"asked Jake
"Welll oh crap,um she likes Cats and well dragons hehe, and i wont tell rose"said Ashes
"Ok bye!"said Jake
"Bye! Oh and if you tell anyone about the Huntsclan Your so freaking dead" said Ashes.
"I wont"said Jake
Ashes smiled and Then ran out the door.
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